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Retta:
I tried to sleep to distract myself from the hunger but I woke up even hungrier.
(10 January 2017)

Retta:
The pain cleared up a bit but it still hurts a little. my mom still sending me to school tomorrow and I'm worried I'm gonna have the same tummy ache.
(10 January 2017)

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I wanted to call a hospital but I was afraid of shots.. I know. silly.
(10 January 2017)

Retta:
I couldn't walk home I couldn't stand up straight for gods sake I was driven home by a neighbor who happened to be nearby.
(10 January 2017)

Retta:
My stomach hurt so much that I started crying and my heart hurt when I'd breath in. my mom took me and sent me home and then went somewhere.
(10 January 2017)

Retta:
Today I had to get picked up from school at first period because I was in excruciating pain.
(10 January 2017)

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I don't have money to buy food myself.
(10 January 2017)

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My mom went out to eat but she didnt take me.
(10 January 2017)

Retta:
I'm not that skinny my body looks healthy but it doesn't feel healthy.
(10 January 2017)

Retta:
Anyway so all I have now is my mum and I HAVEN'T EATEN IN 4 DAYS I'm starving and I feel light headed.
(10 January 2017)